Seven days…
Seven deadly sins…
Lust
Shadow caught her delicate throat in perfect moonlight. Onyx pebbled her needy eyes as she watched him trace the moist tip of his tongue along the goblet’s edge, watching her right back.
He smiled.
Her skin came alive with sensation. The surrounding air hummed.
He tweaked the tip of her wine bottle, grazed the lid with his hot fingertips, twisted, poured and drank, licking the liquid from his soft lips.
Quivering shadow plunged over skin from her tight swallow. Then she lunged for him, mouth, skin, all…
He took her, untouched, with desirous pain, crimson dripping, staining her sweet breast.
This post is part of the Seven Days, Seven Deadly Sins Blog Challenge started by the lovely Lady Antimony of the blog Thoughts, Musings and Broken Promises.
Are your sins this sensual…?
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I was a bit confused by her lunging at him when he is the one drinking her? But other than that I really enjoyed this peice, Lust was my favorite sin to write 🙂
Holy smokes!
I think I need a shower. WOW. EXCELLENT take on lust.
Keep em' coming, Rebecca.
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Sorry. A little flash.
Thank you for that.
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See you tomorrow.
Ohh! Just when it was getting good too! Durned word count! You really evoke the feeling of Lust here, and as a reader I really want more. Seems like a very elegant setting with the darkness described with words like onyx.
It's so nice to get so many brilliant comments. I'm sorry that there wasn't enough for some of you, but you can always imagine what happens next. 😉
Glitter, I was trying to bring two different types of lust into it – her lust for him and his blood lust for her.
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